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Twizdid Admin
Posts : 242 Age : 27 Location : Adelaide, South Australia Mood : Breaking the habit, praying for some help Something random : iUberXlyPwnUN3wbishly Reputation : 1 PokeCoins : 540
| Subject: Title: And yet my heart screams your name Mon Jun 29, 2009 2:53 am | |
| You walk by me and my heart pounds.. What is this, this feeling.. You hold me and I feel like screaming with joy.. And I know that this is love..
But the thing is, I feel this for others.. What does this mean? It confuses me, I don't understand it.. Who is my true love?
I only thought of you tonight, no others.. Does this make it true? Thinking of you intoxicates me, Like a drug, addicted to you..
I belong to another.. But I don't think of him, only you.. I'm in love with him.. To break his heart would scar mine..
And yet my heart screams your name. | |
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Storm Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Title: And yet my heart screams your name Mon Jun 29, 2009 3:00 am | |
| thats good Twizzy. Good poem. You wrote that i take it? | |
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Twizdid Admin
Posts : 242 Age : 27 Location : Adelaide, South Australia Mood : Breaking the habit, praying for some help Something random : iUberXlyPwnUN3wbishly Reputation : 1 PokeCoins : 540
| Subject: Re: Title: And yet my heart screams your name Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:27 am | |
| Yes, I did.
I don't steal poems and claim them as my own. I also just poured my heart and soul into it last night. ._. | |
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Splash_King Member
Posts : 604 Location : The Hall of Origin Mood : Splashing Something random : Magikarps - YOU LIEK THAM? Reputation : 2 PokeCoins : 1491
| Subject: Re: Title: And yet my heart screams your name Mon Jun 29, 2009 6:07 am | |
| You noticed my post about poetry?! Win. Ah, very nice poem, Twizdid. There's quite a bit of strong, truthful emotion coming from it; mixed emotion, no doubt. I'm questioning whether to bring up my old poetry, so I'd like some opinions... I used to be emo (really, really emo), and I knew nothing about the rules and guidelines of poetry, way back when... So it's not the best of quality. I doubt any of it's as good as this. =/ I'd still upload it if anyone is actually interested in dark poetry. | |
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Twizdid Admin
Posts : 242 Age : 27 Location : Adelaide, South Australia Mood : Breaking the habit, praying for some help Something random : iUberXlyPwnUN3wbishly Reputation : 1 PokeCoins : 540
| Subject: Re: Title: And yet my heart screams your name Mon Jun 29, 2009 10:36 am | |
| Actually, I didn't notice any posts about poetry. I just needed a place to put this so EnviousEvan could see it ;D
And yeah. This is about stuff going on in a roleplay chat for me, not real-life but it doesn't change the amount of emotion I feel.
I'd like to see your poems. All my poems are about love and depression, my strongest emotions, so I won't be put off that they're dark. | |
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Splash_King Member
Posts : 604 Location : The Hall of Origin Mood : Splashing Something random : Magikarps - YOU LIEK THAM? Reputation : 2 PokeCoins : 1491
| Subject: Re: Title: And yet my heart screams your name Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:40 pm | |
| - Twizdid wrote:
- Actually, I didn't notice any posts about poetry.
I just needed a place to put this so EnviousEvan could see it ;D *facepalm* Lol, I guess it was a coincidence I was talking about poetry on one of Storm 's threads. Nevermind me, then. - Twizdid wrote:
- I'd like to see your poems.
All my poems are about love and depression, my strongest emotions, so I won't be put off that they're dark. Alright then... I'll post one of them. | |
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